Sunday, 2 September 2007

Silver Lining II

Do you hear that?
No? Listen carefully.
There, that is the sound of deceit.
What about now?
Yes,the shattering of hopes, breaking of dreams.

The cause?
It.
It came, stayed, left.
No reasons, just excuses,
Leaving behind an empty space, a hole.

The cloud was dark, stormy.
When it left, things much more meaningful filled the hole.
The knowledge of what's important, what's not,
The wisdom of what's real, what's fake,
The difference between what's permanent, what's temporary,
The value of promises made, words said,
The determination to improve, to excel.
Amazing, isn't it?
After all, Experience is the best teacher.

Is this what they call the silver lining?
Must be.
The cloud has gone into non-existence, a faint memory,
And the lining has wiped away the streaks that it left.

1 comment:

Muddman said...

Most interesting my friend. I likes it very much.

The "listen" thing is a little cliched, but used well. "No reasons, just excuses", very nice.....

I giving you thumbs-up.

Peace and cheese and keep it coming....